This
place was so hot. After we arrived at Bitec, we sat in a huge tent where
different schools gather and get their tickets. There was so many schools just
by looking at different uniforms. I'm sure some of them might have even came
all the way from other province. We sat there for about 10 minutes looking left
and right, talk to friends. It was not very bright and I could say it's quite
dark in there.
After
we finally got the ticket, or sticker to put on your shirt, we walk out of the
tent toward the exhibition. It was so crowded just by walking on the road and
there's too much people and noises that I could barely find my friend. When we
arrived at the exhibition, the place was huge. It was grandiose and they got ac in it. The building looks great but not the content inside.
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Inside,
there was multifarious booth and experiments but I just walk pass them. The people are just too much. You could
hardly walk into the experiment to observe or learn something. You couldn’t
even listen to what they said. I am disinterested anyway so I didn't cared much. I quickly finished my physics work and sit in
the food court for the rest of the day. The food court was quiet at first. Of
course it would be! It’s only about 10am! After some times, I started to hear some
noises and saw some people. The noises kept getting louder and louder that I couldn’t
talk to my friends who sit beside me. You can find plenty of restaurant with exorbitance prices but there was just this one ramen shop which was much cheaper than others so I chose that ramen shop. That ramen shop could not satiate me with the taste but I have no choice, the others are just too expensive.
After
we finished eating, the food court became a concert and the smell was nothing I
could describe with the few words I know. It was terrible. Just imagine
trashes, leftover, different kinds of thai food and fast food and the worst
thing, sweat mixed together. How bad that smell would be. But in the end, I
endured it and return safely from that place.
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First of all, I can see many mistakes on 'there was and there were’, tenses error, and also capitalization errors. You should be more careful on it next time. You use simple words but the essay is still very descriptive. I am there at the place so it’s easier for me to imagine the scene in my mind. Good job and keep it up next time.
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